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 ==Act One ==
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-Liam is part of the adventurers that followed [[Aradin]] to the Shattered Sanctum to [[Find the Nightsong]]. According to [[Remira]], Liam was the first to charge at the goblins, but the rest of the adventurers did not follow him.
+Liam is one of the adventurers that followed [[Aradin]] to the [[Shattered Sanctum]], hoping to [[Find the Nightsong|find the Nightsong]]. According to [[Remira]], Liam was the first to charge the goblins, but the other adventurers thought he was reckless and left him to his fate.
-The player can decide to show the goblins how to properly torture their prisoner through a series of dialogs. If successful, Liam will reveal the location of the Grove, and [[Torturer Spike]] will then report the information to [[Minthara]]. After they're gone, the player can still try to convince Liam he is on his side anyway, and free him.
+The player can decide to show the goblins how to properly torture their prisoner. If successful, Liam will reveal the location of the Grove, and [[Torturer Spike]] will report the information to [[Minthara]]. After the goblins have gone the player can try to convince Liam they are on his side and free him.
-Alternatively, the player can chose to free Liam by either killing the goblins or convincing Torturer Spike to leave. If successfully released, Liam will run away through an obscure path in the same room.
+Alternatively, the player can choose to free Liam by either killing the goblins or convincing Torturer Spike to leave. If successfully released, Liam will run away through a hidden path in the same room.
 Afterwards, he can be found resting in the [[Emerald Grove]] next to his fellow adventures.